I’ll be honest, “I WANT TO (Song For Susan)” by Merlin Swann doesn’t feel like something that was simply written, it feels like something that was lived through. There’s a soft, steady country-folk warmth running through it, and if you’ve ever been drawn to the storytelling style of someone like John Denver, you’ll probably understand why this one lands the way it does. As the song reaches its emotional peak, Davy’s sincerity comes through most clearly in the line: “I want you to know, I want to give you my heart, I want to give my soul” a simple but powerful declaration that captures the entire spirit of the track in one breath, turning gratitude and love into something unmistakably direct and heartfelt.
What really gives the track its weight is the story behind it. Davy Riley writing this as a thank-you to his wife Susan after such a difficult time adds a layer you just can’t fake in a studio. It’s not over-dramatic or overly polished—if anything, it’s a bit raw around the edges in a way that actually works in its favour. His voice carries that lived-in honesty, like he’s not performing so much as remembering. You believe him, and that matters more than anything.
Lesley Bullen’s presence in the track is subtle but important. The harmonies aren’t trying to steal attention, but they lift everything just enough to make the emotion sit a little deeper. There’s also something quite charming about the way this was built over time, piece by piece, rather than being forced into a perfect, instant recording. You can tell it came from two people who’ve known each other musically for years and understand when to hold back and when to add a little colour.
By the end, “I WANT TO (Song For Susan)” feels less like a polished single and more like a message sent out into the world. It’s simple, sincere, and honestly a bit moving in its restraint. Merlin Swann aren’t trying to reinvent anything here, they’re just telling a real story in the most direct way they can. And sometimes, that’s exactly what sticks with you.
